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Notes for 18-Sep-2019...


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	KAFKA'S UNCLE AND OTHER STRANGE TALES by "Mr. Magical Realism" Bruce Taylor

		Amazon: www.amazon.com/dp/B01GW717I8/?tag=critters3a-20
		ReAnimus Press Store: www.ReAnimus.com/1513
		 (also available in paperback)
	

	 An alternate universe? A different dimension? The "id" of America? Meet Anslenot and his tormentor/confident, a giant tarantula, as they wander through a blasted, desecrated landscape of broken ideals and shattered hopes. In this place, nothing is right. The Militant Lambs fight with the Opposition and no one knows whose side who is on. Add to that Martians... Venusians... Elvis.... To top it off, Anslenot is hounded by his dysfunctional family and upbringing...and legendary surrealist Franz Kafka makes Anslenot his honorary uncle. Nightmarish, strange, bizarre--the way things are to be? Or the way things--really are?
	Also included in this collection is the novella The Humphrey Bogart Blues, a sympathetic look at Marilyn Monroe, who had she just been able to hook up with the Martians...
	...and twenty-eight additional stories, previously published as well as some unpublished, testify to the breadth and scope of writing of, as one editor has stated, one of the top writers of Magic Realism.

	And of course there's also KAFKA'S UNCLE: THE UNFORTUNATE SEQUEL, KAFKA'S UNCLE: THE GHASTLY PREQUEL, and TALES FROM THE GOOD SHIP KAFKABURY for your enjoyment.

	Praise for KAFKA'S UNCLE

	 "It's important to realize that Bruce's stories are not strange; the world is, and he's separated himself from it in order to show us new realities, with remarkable clarity and insight. I am one of his admirers, and I am not alone.
	--"DUNE" author BRIAN HERBERT

	"Bruce Taylor has earned the title of "Mr. Magic Realism" by dint of producing works that are fascinating, insightful, and downright fun to read. His fiction will make you think...and smile."
	--BEN BOVA

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Thanks for the donations, folks!  We are 70.2% of the way to the fund drive goal with contributions from 113 donors, leaving about $1200 to go.
Thanks especially to

	Deborah Ross
	Bill Leonard

for their recent donations to help keep Critters going. Much appreciated!

[See http://www.critters.org/donate.php for more information.]


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Woohoo!  Congratulations to...

	- Russell Dorn, whose (Critter'd) short story, "Long Stretches"
	is now out in the current issue of Third Flatiron. {My short
	story "Long Stretches," crittered under the title  "Reruns,"
	is to be published in Third Flatiron's Infinite Lives: Short
	Tales of Longevity anthology.

	Available for pre-order:

	https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07XVN23X6}


Please report your Woohoo!s via the www.critters.org/telldaworld.ht web page.


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This week's Most Productive Critter award, for 8 critiques (at time
of judging), averaging over 1300 words each, goes to...

	Russell Adams

To redeem an MPC, visit:  www.critters.org/usempc.ht

Congratulations!  To everyone else -- Crit early and often!

(For an explanation of the MPC award, see the www.critters.org/award.ht page.)

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Recommended Reading...
One of the best writing books - Secrets from the 6-time Best Editor
Hugo Award Master, Ben Bova: THE CRAFT OF WRITING SCIENCE FICTION THAT SELLS 
http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1144
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This week we have... [get from http://www.critters.org/private/mss.php ]...
                                                 
     Title                      	Author
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Week of 18-Sep-2019 (Crits due 25-Sep-2019):
 F   The Wizards of Llandwellyn: Part 2: Chapter 3  Eric Wilson -#28695
 SF  Alien Alliance, part 3             Chris Turner -#28696
 SF  Titan Insurgents, Prologue and Chap 1  Kathy London -#28697
 F   The Island at the Bottom of the World  Matthew Duerst -#28698
 F   What the Mountain Keeps            JF Gabriel -#28699
 F   Reptilian Barbarian and the Templum Solarium  Andrew Giffin -#28700
 SF  Life is a carousel in 6 Acts + Finis  Bob Freeman -#28701
 H   New Teacher                        Kevin Stadt -#28702
 F   Infection in Everything            Chris Hepler -#28703
 SF  Goddess of No Surrender            William Broom -#28704
 SF  Further to Fall, Chapter 1         Garrett Menning -#28705
 F   The Two, Chapters 0-2              Catherine Ford -#28706
 F   Evetia Chapters 1-5                Sean Angelo -#28707

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Recommended books on writing:

THE CRAFT OF WRITING AND SELLING SCIENCE FICTION by Ben Bova
	ReAnimus Press Store: http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1144
	Amazon: http://Amazon.com/dp/B006MAZPEI

HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR SPECULATIVE FICTION OPENINGS By (Critter member) Robert Qualkinbush
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1184 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007O272ZI

STAYIN' ALIVE - A WRITER'S GUIDE by three-time SFWA President Norman Spinrad
	How things really work in the art and commerce of publishing
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1179 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007SIC4I8

EXPERIMENT PERILOUS: THE 'BUG JACK BARRON' PAPERS by Norman Spinrad
	(A 99cent essay on SF and writing)
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1180 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007MF3MS8
 
Because you might enjoy it... IN SEARCH OF WONDER by DAMON KNIGHT
The premier book of SF insight for all SF readers and writers.
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1412
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Pieces up for critique in other workshops...

In the lit workshop - http://critique.org/lit :
 L   The Circle of Souls                Tom Knemeyer -#28681
 L   Development                        Abigail Rowe -#28682

In the mystery workshop - http://critique.org/mystery :
 AC  Lost in the Desert of Ziph         Courtney Webb -#28433

In the nonfiction workshop - http://critique.org/nonfiction :
 NO  Chapter 1. A Great man Falls       Jim Parry -#28486

In the script workshop - http://critique.org/script :
 SC  Loose Lips                         Robert Qualkinbush -#28625

In the kids workshop - http://critique.org/kids :
 YP  Saul T. Unyon: The Short End of a Tall Tale  Michelle Henrie -#28566

In the comics workshop - http://critique.org/comics :
 CG  Metropolise, Chapter 1             Carina Mchardy -#26473

In the western workshop - http://critique.org/western :
 W   A Message to Santa Fe, Chap 1-3    Frank Coombs -#25375

In the romance workshop - http://critique.org/romance :
 R   Pack Chapters 1-3                  Anastasia Bromberg -#28384

In the video workshop - http://critique.org/video :
 VS  The Gallery of Henri Beauchamp     Jay DeTalente -#21424

In the music workshop - http://critique.org/music :
 MP  The Shade Riders and Nocturnal Ned song  Beth Zurkowski -#21675

In the photo workshop - http://critique.org/photo :
 PH  Dry Mud and Cinder Cone            Bill Wight -#19627

In the art workshop - http://critique.org/art :
 AH  Art Man, a portrait                Robert J Cleary -#27847

In the website workshop - http://critique.org/website :
 WW  Ax-yZ The Creative Projects Platform  Charles Gull -#27088

In the critters workshop - http://critique.org/critters :
 F   The Wizards of Llandwellyn: Part 2: Chapter 3  Eric Wilson -#28695
 SF  Alien Alliance, part 3             Chris Turner -#28696
 SF  Titan Insurgents, Prologue and Chap 1  Kathy London -#28697
 F   The Island at the Bottom of the World  Matthew Duerst -#28698
 F   What the Mountain Keeps            JF Gabriel -#28699
 F   Reptilian Barbarian and the Templum Solarium  Andrew Giffin -#28700
 SF  Life is a carousel in 6 Acts + Finis  Bob Freeman -#28701
 H   New Teacher                        Kevin Stadt -#28702
 F   Infection in Everything            Chris Hepler -#28703
 SF  Goddess of No Surrender            William Broom -#28704
 SF  Further to Fall, Chapter 1         Garrett Menning -#28705
 F   The Two, Chapters 0-2              Catherine Ford -#28706
 F   Evetia Chapters 1-5                Sean Angelo -#28707
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You might also like... OFF ON A DREAM AND OTHER MAGICAL REALITIES by BRUCE TAYLOR
Magical Realism from the master thereof
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1601

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Because you might enjoy it... PAST THE SLEEPING SONS OF GOD by ALFRED COPPEL
Flor Ortega - CIA agent's daughter, poet, lover - and passionate revolutionary - has been kidnapped.
https://reanimus.com/store/?item=1599

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